Punctuation

My goal  is to use basic punctuation that is mostly correct in my writing. I think that I'v got better but I can still get better I need to get better at my comers and full stops.I can improve my punctuation by using it in my writing.when I'm finished I reread and put in spelling and comers and full stops.

HAM DOG!

HAM DOG

 Today on Kiwi kids news I lent about the  Ham dog.the ham dog is an cross between a hot dog and a burger it was made by an Australian man (Mark) the paddy of the Ham dog is split in 1/2  so the sausage can go between the paddy.he is selling them at fares he says that there where lots of people lining up waiting  to try one.