R.E Reflection.

This week we have been writing a retell of the last super I fell good about my writing become I manged to couplet it in A reliability short time but still had time to revise and edit.To things I will remember about my writing is that you shod remember to listen over the clip a few times so you can describe it as it was the other was to try to write it in you on words as much as you can and still include all the in portent freshers and word in it.I use to struggle to find time to edit but now that it is my gole it is something I what to prove.I am liking these retails but want to also try so other new kinds of story like an argument.

Faith and the criterion

This week we learned how to revise and edit our writing this team we were trying to base our bloggers around Our R.E and retelling stories.this week we write about the faith of the centurion. I feel good about my writing because I have revised and edited in my writing I used to struggle to revise as I did not know what it was but now Mrs. Akamine made us whack a video that unpacked it for me. two things I will remember is that revising and editing are both different and that you shot always try to add better words.
I am excited to see the next story we retail here is the faith and the criterion video.

Faith And The Cinterion 

circle safety week.

this week was bike week. it is when you bring your bike to school and people make sure you are safe on your bike as well as your bike being safe to ride on the first day it was guest talking about biking but I did learn some interesting thing on the way I learnt that a good way to chek your bike is to use the ABC it stands for air, breaks,cain.they also shade us a video about a boy how did the wrong thing when cycling and had a bad antacid it did not end up too good for him 😵 another thing I learnt for the helmet was that your bills had  to put To fingers on to of other on you Eyebrows and be able to touch the roof of you helmet this is good because it what hit your helmet before the face the helmet also Forbes the shock.this is why the helmet is very inportent.

My next steps

 I Feel good about my writing because I successfully used paragraphs in my writing I also managed to write for a long period of time.I use to struggle on remembering to put spare grafts into my writing but now somehow I can remember two things I will remember is to add similes and metaphors into my writing.the other is to use the hamburger to direct my writing into begining, middle, and end.the next step in my writing is to go back and edit my writing lately my editing has been hard because my writing has been very long it is 8 pages long :(

Narratives

this week we learned how to write a narrative I fond out that there has to be a problem in the narrative it is also made up.I fell good about my narrative because I have made a problem and have written a lot in my drive I use to struggle to find ideas but now I can go on literacy hub to help me I also struggled on getting my writing into paragraphs
two thing I will remember is that there is an intrurdukshon,midill and end the other is to make sure you introduce your characters.a strategy that I just is the planning sheet.
overall, I am liking narrative and I am doing a chapter book that is a native.