Faith and the criterion

This week we learned how to revise and edit our writing this team we were trying to base our bloggers around Our R.E and retelling stories.this week we write about the faith of the centurion. I feel good about my writing because I have revised and edited in my writing I used to struggle to revise as I did not know what it was but now Mrs. Akamine made us whack a video that unpacked it for me. two things I will remember is that revising and editing are both different and that you shot always try to add better words.
I am excited to see the next story we retail here is the faith and the criterion video.

Faith And The Cinterion